Danls92
01-23-2008, 04:06 PM
Hey guys, just wanted to show you a logo that I made and wanted to get your opinions on it. I know that the text is a little hard to read, and I'm working to fix this, but I just wanted to get any preliminary thoughts and opinions.
(The picture is pretty large and takes a while to load, since I like to make pictures large then shrink them down in order to preserve quality).
http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ipodtouchfansjg0.png
*This thread is in no way official, or sanctioned by bgizzle. This was just something I made in my spare time.*
negamaki
01-23-2008, 04:09 PM
hey man great job! I wouldnt mind that being the new logo, i think it is cool with all of the apps hidden like that
x6blues
01-23-2008, 04:11 PM
very nice, but the background seems depressing :(, id change it put some color that would make it amazing. nice work
starmatrix
01-23-2008, 04:12 PM
Way cool! The only thing that isn't that pleasing to me is the red+black lettering of "iPod touch fans".. it has this scary feeling to it =S
Other than that I like everything else :D
Spyda
01-23-2008, 04:17 PM
looks nice. good work bud.
Danls92
01-23-2008, 04:27 PM
very nice, but the background seems depressing :(, id change it put some color that would make it amazing. nice work
What sort of colors are you thinking? I was considering a blue or greenish.
spoonforknife
01-23-2008, 04:29 PM
I personally think it looks a little busy. I like more "slick + modernish" things like the current logo which I do adore. But looks nice.
x6blues
01-23-2008, 04:32 PM
just go with wutever colors, im not creative so i cant help :p but yea a bluish and green would "compliment" the logo nicely :)
I don't like it.
I think the lightning is gimmicky and pointless.
Not using Myriad Pro as your font is sacrilege.
Static? Why?
Blue and white are the apple colors, not red and black.
I'm not a mean person, I just assume that you want my truthful opinion.
Danls92
01-23-2008, 05:01 PM
;215970']I don't like it.
I think the lightning is gimmicky and pointless.
Not using Myriad Pro as your font is sacrilege.
Static? Why?
Blue and white are the apple colors, not red and black.
I'm not a mean person, I just assume that you want my truthful opinion.
I wouldn't have asked for input if I didn't want your honest opinion :D
Anyways, here is the second version of the logo taking into account some of your comments. So what do you guys like/dislike/think?
http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=logo2zs7.png
minja3418
01-23-2008, 05:05 PM
I wouldn't have asked for input if I didn't want your honest opinion :D
Anyways, here is the second version of the logo taking into account some of your comments. So what do you guys like/dislike/think?
http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=logo2zs7.png
the second version is great.. the first one is good to but i like the second one...
good job!
negamaki
01-23-2008, 05:06 PM
I thought the first one was great but i like the second one even better!
i like the blue lightning effect better and it makes the apps more visible.
shotgunfool
01-23-2008, 05:07 PM
not to hijack the thread but the new logo for the site is sick!
Danls92
01-23-2008, 05:12 PM
not to hijack the thread but the new logo for the site is sick!
Bit of a misunderstand, are you talking about my logo or the current logo?
And to appease my OCD, I remade it so that the jailbroken ipod (on the right) is the same size as the one on the left. http://img262.imageshack.us/my.php?image=logo3zr2.gif
If anybody wants to see it in different colors, let me know!
(for instance, here is it in green... I don't like it as much, but somebody might: http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=logo3greenrx3.gif)
starmatrix
01-23-2008, 06:32 PM
Nice work!
Just a suggestion, but perhaps the words could be a different colour from the background so it doesn't appear camouflaged? It might look better.. or might not
Virtualball
01-23-2008, 08:21 PM
To be honest, it looks a little.... 90's photoshop to me :\
I'll look up some tutorials and get back to you with something I'd do (probably gunna SUCK!)
Here's a ticket I did for our school's snoball dance
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4592/ticketkg7.jpg
Danls92
01-23-2008, 08:51 PM
To be honest, it looks a little.... 90's photoshop to me :\
I'll look up some tutorials and get back to you with something I'd do (probably gunna SUCK!)
Here's a ticket I did for our school's snoball dance
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4592/ticketkg7.jpg
Haha, I wouldn't know the difference between 90's photoshop and modern photoshop. Could you clarify what you mean a bit? This was just something I came up with while messing around.
BryDeeC
01-23-2008, 09:00 PM
To be honest, it looks a little.... 90's photoshop to me :\
I'll look up some tutorials and get back to you with something I'd do (probably gunna SUCK!)
Here's a ticket I did for our school's snoball dance
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4592/ticketkg7.jpg
Completely off-topic: Woah! Your school has the same intials as mine.
Anyway, I like the logo Danls made :) But, the one we already have is pretty nice too :)
Virtualball
01-23-2008, 09:29 PM
Well, I tried to make one quickly.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1871/picts0.png
Also, 90's photoshop is... well... shitty. It looks cheaply done, rather than using the new techniques the CS1-3 offers. No offense, btw, I just meant it didn't look professional. :\
x6blues
01-23-2008, 09:34 PM
Well, I tried to make one quickly.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1871/picts0.png
Also, 90's photoshop is... well... shitty. It looks cheaply done, rather than using the new techniques the CS1-3 offers. No offense, btw, I just meant it didn't look professional. :\
Danls urs is good but this is one is f***in great. if u could really focus on this it would look amazing. probally take out the we own you part, seems a little odd, i dont wanna get raped....
Danls92
01-23-2008, 09:59 PM
Also, 90's photoshop is... well... shitty. It looks cheaply done, rather than using the new techniques the CS1-3 offers. No offense, btw, I just meant it didn't look professional. :\
If I'd been using photoshop for more than a week I might take offense to that but hey, we all need to start somewhere, right? :D
Vision_Again
01-23-2008, 10:04 PM
wow I like it a lot just the txt is a bit hard to read otherwise it awsome
BMANZZS
01-23-2008, 10:18 PM
Maybe I'm being too critical, but I don't really like it too much. The dark colors with the lightninish background make it look a little too epic for a nice forum and community. To be honest, I don't find the font very attractive either, maybe a little too italisized or titlted in a way. It's pretty hard to read. It's also very easy to tell that you just added the default values for the old "Texturizer" filter on the whole picture, nothing very fancy.
However, I really like the idea of a transition from a regular iPod to an obviously jailbroken one with a page full of applications.
Sorry if I sound a little mean, I'm not trying to be. I just wouldn't want this as a banner for iPod touch fans. =X I suggest playing around a little more in Photoshop before posting another banner. The overall feel of this banner makes it seem like a new Photoshop artist drew it.
EDIT: I just saw that you just started using Photoshop less than a week ago... that explains a lot. Heh.
Virtualball
01-23-2008, 10:21 PM
If I'd been using photoshop for more than a week I might take offense to that but hey, we all need to start somewhere, right? :D
No. You should start good if you want to be good!
I'm just kidding :)
Higuy, I would love to do the logo, but A) They just redid it, B) I can't fit anything into 348x100, and C) I like the logo. Though, they could easily be sued for copyright infringement (I believe) for taking the default Desktop and turning it into their logo...
EDIT: BMANZZS, what's with the Acid2 avatar? Did my browser pass?
BMANZZS
01-23-2008, 10:30 PM
No. You should start good if you want to be good!
EDIT: BMANZZS, what's with the Acid2 avatar? Did my browser pass?
Haha. You mean signature? Not exactly Acid2, but it's the closest thing I could get to a picture as my signature. Especially when the limit is 11x4 pixels... >_<
rokrboy
01-23-2008, 11:03 PM
that logo is insanley good, good job. How long did it take to make that?
iatealitlebabie
01-23-2008, 11:08 PM
who is going to start the unofficial logo contest? :D Ya'll dont want me to even bust out photoshop.
Virtualball
01-23-2008, 11:16 PM
that logo is insanley good, good job. How long did it take to make that?
Who're you talking too?
buffonitaly
01-23-2008, 11:24 PM
Think that the banners look fairly good, but I think that there should be something like an ipod touch in coverflow that fades out to black and turned sideways as to fit in the top banner.
By the way why is there no default leopard page background when ipodtouchfans.com looked more like TUAW back in October or so? I liked that.
luigispinal
01-24-2008, 10:51 AM
well.. some things have changed over here buffonitaly XD i would like a contest por an unofficial logo :)
Virtualball
01-24-2008, 12:48 PM
Well, i had another go, and I tried to emulate the current logo. Instead of using Apple's vortex, I made my own and made the stars vibrant in a pattern. It's not done but I don't know what else to do with it....
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9128/prospectivezl3.png
Any ideas?
dadedesigns
01-24-2008, 01:41 PM
Cool, But those arent logos dudes. Those are Banners, Logo is something like Nike's check mark. Or Apples, apple.. etc.
Nice, but i dig the current banner.
iatealitlebabie
01-25-2008, 12:18 AM
i think about poo when i look at it... (talking about the current logo)
robertandenith
01-25-2008, 07:28 AM
Danls92 I like your logo but I am not a big fan of the font you are using :( probably is you use one more tech like the one Virtualball is using? I like the one that is already in use, probably make the background less busy in the sides? like the way it is in the actual logo, like fading away sideways... hope I am explaining myself had too much coffee today lol gotta go to work!!!
staticoranges
01-28-2008, 10:09 PM
I just made this one. I think you should stick to the current size if you're talking about the top banner thing. If not, then disregard this message.
nclaxmiddy11
01-29-2008, 09:25 PM
Well I think that these are all pretty good. With Dansl92's maybe you should decrese some of the lighting and also maybe put like a semi-transparent pointing arrow at the bottom. (Like this is the old gay iPod then - Arrow - This is your new jailbroke iPod!)
BigDaveyJ
01-29-2008, 10:37 PM
i love it, one difference that could be made is the font color, i would make it white because u cant really see all of it
I_am_Mad_like_This
02-02-2008, 06:22 PM
At the very start, he is from the evil clutches of its demented creator to the life of freedom. Jailbreak.
DeusMachina
02-11-2008, 08:34 PM
Im sorry, not trying to be mean or anything... but it's horrible =/. It almost looks like it was made in paint or something. The background is dull and has almost nothing to it, the text is distorted and ugly. The render's of the ipods are distorted and badly mis-shapen. I mean its great that your trying, but its just not up to par for the site banner. Sorry for being harsh ><.
Danls92
02-11-2008, 08:36 PM
Im sorry, not trying to be mean or anything... but it's horrible =/. It almost looks like it was made in paint or something. The background is dull and has almost nothing to it, the text is distorted and ugly. The render's of the ipods are distorted and badly mis-shapen. I mean its great that your trying, but its just not up to par for the site banner. Sorry for being harsh ><.
Nah, I wouldn't have posted if I didn't want criticism. I'm just getting aquanted with Photoshop, and I'm still developing my "style." Thank you to everybody that has commented, you've really helped me improve :)
skyline_-
02-16-2008, 11:25 PM
I agree with crazy. Join up on some graphics community and do some reading, look at some tutorials get some renders, fonts and mess around. Get the basic's done even if you have to copy tutorials exactly thats fine you will get your style later.
:)
Danls92
02-16-2008, 11:26 PM
Let me just say for the record that I have gotten much better and I'm rather embarrased at the picture I posted, I think I'm going to close this.